Benny and the Jets revision 1

Benny and the Jets

The Jacuzzi jets were relentless once activated. The inebriated hand that had brought them to life now skimmed across the bubbling water to gauge the temperature. Just hot enough. Ben turned back toward the blonde waiting in her black bikini behind the glass sliding door. Though the water was warm, the California mountain air carried a chill through the unfenced backyard, and Karly was not exposing herself to the cold until absolutely necessary. Ben signaled for her to join him now that the hot tub had been uncovered and the alcohol the two planned to continue drinking was placed on a table convenient to their reach from the heat. Karly slid open the door and quickly skittered across the cement patio to submerge herself just below her neck in the steaming tub.

Ben returned inside to pick up two towels which Karly, in her excitement, had forgotten to take with her. He shut the sliding door behind him when he returned, and threw the two beach towels on the edge of the small steps leading up to the Jacuzzi.

“I call the Spiderman one.” He said as he removed his shirt and placed it next to a box of wine on the table.

Ben was also quick to be fully in the water. He gave a small chuckle when he pushed the excess air which had trapped itself in his trunks out and it bubbled to the surface. After making himself comfortable he realized that neither of them had drinks in their hands and that Karly was likely expecting him to fix that. He leaned out of the tub and poured two cups of wine from the box the two of them picked up in Mesquite on their way to Ben’s dad’s house in the small California mountain town of Tehachapi. He filled both cups nearly to the brim and handed one to Karly.

“Thanks.” She said as the cup traded hands.

“No problem.” Ben replied. He then made himself comfortable in the corner opposite of Karly, nestling his back into the jets.

“This is the shit.” Karly said taking a big sip of wine.

“Yeah it’s definitely a great way to end your night after bar hopping with your Dad and his old hippie girlfriend.”

“She got really drunk tonight.” Karly laughed.

“I definitely wasn’t expecting to see her trying to grind on my dad so much.”

“Whatever, I thought it was hilarious. I wish I could have gotten that drunk tonight.”

“Well there’s still plenty of time to catch up.” Ben said, raising his cup in a toast-like fashion. Karly laughed as she returned the gesture and the two took large sips from their cups.

           “Plus I have another little treat for us to enjoy in the hot tub.” He added when the cup left his lips.

He reached out from the Jacuzzi again, this time picking up his stash can which was disguised as an innocent Coke. He made sure to first dry his hands on one of the towels, then unscrewed the top of the can and tilted it to the side pulling out a joint and a small orange lighter; from which Karly’s excitement grew.

“I’ve always wanted to smoke a joint in a hot tub.” Ben said as regained his position across from Karly and lit the joint at the wick.

“I’ve just been looking forward to this hot tub since you told me about it last week. A semester of mostly dance classes leaves you a little sore.”

“You can’t try to make me feel bad for you taking a bunch of glorified P.E. classes.” Ben laughed between deep smoke inhalations.

“Whatever, you’re just jealous I never have to take another serious class for the rest of my time.”

“No you’re absolutely right, I’d love to just dance around all day every week.” Ben said passing the burning paper to Karly.

Karly laughed before she took a drag, “I can’t see you dancing that much sober.”

“Who said anything about being sober?” Ben replied. “I’m twenty-one, I do what I want.” The two laughed some more. “Besides I’d do just about any dance for hours on end if it meant no more math for the rest of my life.”

“I think you’re always going to need math.” Karly replied, handing the joint back to Ben.

“Yeah but I think I’ve got enough math skills to survive in life. I’m trying to be a writer,” He said taking another drag, his voice now deep with smoke. “Knowing how to find the measurement of a hypotenuse isn’t going to make dialogue flow more smoothly.”

“Well what if you wanted to write some sort of mathematical mystery thriller thing?”

“I have an imagination that can let me write about literally anything in the world and I’m going to write a book about math? Or math that kills people? Frankly, fuck that.”

“You’re right, that does sound pretty bad.” Karly laughed, plucking the paper from Ben’s fingers. “You were also right about smoking in the hot tub, this feels pretty fuckin’ great.”

Ben grabbed his cup of wine and took several large sips. “The alcohol doesn’t hurt either.”

“It was nice of your dad to get us drunk beforehand too.”

“Yeah honestly even though I did just turn twenty-one, I really wasn’t expecting him to want to go wild with us. He didn’t even start drinking himself until a few years ago.”

“Really? Isn’t he like in his late forties?”

“Yeah, well that’s what happens when you’re Mormon most of your life, leave the church, and then work in the coldest parts of Russia for a whole year.”

“That makes sense; I don’t think I could do that without vodka.”

“But the difference is that you’d rather do most things with vodka.”

Karly laughed, “That’s true.”

By now the marijuana was all but finished. Ben dragged the last of it down almost to his fingertips before tossing it out into the night, then let out a long sigh.

“Well, I don’t know about you, but I’m pretty stoned.” He said.

“I’m just so relaxed.” Karly replied. “It feels nice just sitting here like this and getting comfortable. Speaking of which...” She said as she handed her now empty cup to Ben for a refill.

“Damn, looks like I’ve got some catching up to do.” Ben said, doing his best to chug the rest of his drink. He refilled both their cups, handing Karly’s back to her.

“Thanks.” She said, following with a few small sips then placing the drink on the cup indent next to her shoulders. “Time to just let go and let the jets take care of everything.”

“Yeah, let go.” Ben said somewhat to himself.

The two were silent for a moment, the only sound the loud bubbling and machinery from the jet system. Then a pair of brown swim trunks surfaced between Ben and Karly.

“Really?” She said smirking.

“Hey you’re the one who said to let go and relax.” Ben replied. “Plus with the jets on it’s not like you can see my junk or anything, and it feels fantastic.”

Karly laughed and rolled her eyes. Ben placed his trunks hanging half off the edge of the Jacuzzi. As he did he noticed Karly’s foot sticking slightly out of the water towards him with her bikini bottom hanging off her toes. Ben gave a small chuckle as he placed hers on top of his and sat back against the jets, trying his best not to seem obvious while attempting to see through the bubbling water surrounding Karly.

“You’re right,” She said, “This does feel pretty fantastic.”

“Seems like I’m right a lot today.” He replied, to which Karly gave a small laugh.

“I’m glad I came here with you.” She said. “Sometimes I feel like I don’t really have that many friends anymore. All the girls I know are just so bitchy.”

“Well what can you expect, you’re majoring in dance. The majority of dancers I’ve known have been bitchy.”

“That’s true, and I never really look for girlfriends outside of those classes.”

“I just think trying to make friends with someone is awkward at this age. Like, hey I know we just met in class but do you want to come play video games some time?”

“That actually doesn’t sound hard.”

“I guess, I’m kind of dick though. I need to start giving people the benefit of the doubt more often.”

“What do you mean?”

“I don’t know, it’s like I always assume the worst of people. If they’re being loud it’s not because they’re fun it’s because they’re stupid. If they’re in a bad mood it’s not because something bad happened to them it’s because they’re an asshole, and if they’re eager to be talk to me it’s not because they’re friendly it’s because they’re weird.” Ben said between sips of wine.

“Yeah you are kind of a dick.” Karly replied.

“Thanks.” Ben laughed.

“I think people are being real most of the time.” She added.

“See and my first thought is to say that you’re naïve. I must just be jaded as fuck or something. But I’m too young to be this cynical.”

“Maybe you’ll grow out of it. Start seeing the world for what it really is.”

“But what if I’m right and everyone is as fucked up as I think they are?”

“Everyone can’t be fucked up. You just don’t need to care so much. Ignore the fuckers and hang out with the people that make you happy. That’s what I’m doing now.”

Ben smiled at those last words, and the two shared a few more sips. Then suddenly the timer on the jets ran out and the bubbles started to fade. The two feigned to panic at seeing each other naked although neither minded the brief glimpses they had before Ben turned the jets back to high.

“That was close.” Karly laughed.

“Yeah, God knows how much I hate seeing hot naked girls.” Ben replied ironically.

            “There’s plenty of hot naked girls out there.”

            “Not quite Karly hot though.”

            “Oh I have my own brand of hot now?”

            “Well let’s just say that you’re as hot as my chest is hairy. Which is to say very.”

            Karly let out a small giggle. “That’s sort of a weird way to put it.”

            “And that’s just my own brand of humor.”

            Karly smiled and leaned her head back against the small cushion supporting her neck and began gazing up at the stars. After a few seconds Ben noticed the clarity of the sky and began doing the same thing.

            “This is why I love shitty little mountain towns.” He said, finishing his second cup of wine. “You empty too?”

            Karly hesitated for a moment, distracted by the gassy denizens of light. “Huh? Oh yeah, but I think I’m good for now.” Ben raised an eyebrow at her. “You’re right,” she laughed and handed him her cup for another refill. She took a few more small sips from the new wine and placed the cup back in its holder.

            “My back and neck are still sore from the car ride today.” She said after some quiet moments.

“Eight hours in that little Oldsmobile will do that to you. How about a rub?” He asked.

            “Well I don’t think I can say no to a cross faded back rub in a hot tub.” She replied. “But you’re coming over here.”

            Ben gave a short laugh and moved the short distance across to Karly who had turned her back toward Ben’s adjusted seat. She then moved the length of her from past her shoulders down her back to her chest, to give Ben’s hands the necessary room. He placed his hands at the top of her shoulders and started rubbing his thumbs in undulation, deep into the muscle. He could feel them relax as she let out a deep sigh. He then started moving his knuckles down her back in a rocking motion, the movements in the water carrying her back and forth, changing her position in the bowled seat.

           

            As Ben continued downward he felt Karly’s light back dimples, a favorite feature of his on any girl, and thought he should perhaps move back up before he was tempted to move any further down. Though now that he had reached down so far his heart began pounding, and were he not in a tub of water his palms would surely be sweaty. And then he noticed a budding erection and tried to put a little more distance between it and Karly’s unsuspecting back.

            He moved his hands gently back up in a similar matter to when they had gone down and started the process from the beginning. This time, however, he reached the tie supporting her bikini top, slowed, and nearly choked to death on his next words.

            “Do you, uh, mind if I get this out of the way?”

            “…No.” She replied after some time.

            Ben’s heart sped up even more as he slowly loosened the bow knots from around her neck and shoulders. He could feel her heart beating at similar pace with his through her back. The top fell and floated around the water for a few seconds before Ben took it and placed it with the other pieces of clothing on the side of the tub. He then continued maneuvering his hands around her.

Moving down past her shoulders again he began widening his placement and tried to nonchalantly brush past the sides of her breasts before continuing downward. By this time Karly was completely turned in her seat now facing the corner, while Ben was no longer seated but half squatting in center of the hot tub. His hands continued to caress her skin down her back, and again he reached those dimples he enjoyed so much.

            Ben figured now he would have to decide whether to continue this experiment, but before his brain had continued the thought, his hands had decided for him.  His left was curving around her thighs, meandering its way upward, while his right had found a place across her stomach, starting at the naval and similarly moving up. He could feel her staggered breaths through her chest and moved closer. He placed his lips just below her left ear lobe, starting with nothing but soft breaths against her skin. Moving ever closer Karly could feel what was once budding and now full, brushing against her back.

            Karly allowed herself to be taken in by the flow, relaxing even deeper in the water and Ben’s ever moving hands, one of which was now firmly planted on her right breast, and the other was stroking the area just below her waist line. Karly was not only relaxing but now getting livelier as well. Her hand ran up Ben’s thigh, eventually grasping him tight between the legs. Finally Ben could wait no longer and closed all space between their bodies. His hand which had been investigating her lower body delved deeper, and Karly uttered a small gasp.

            Unanimously the two thought to end the foreplay as Ben began grinding hard against Karly, who arched slightly forward and helped to guide him in from behind her. When the timer on the jets came to an end soon after, their inhibitions completely crashed and the two stopped holding back. Ben held on with care to Karly’s hips and started moving into her with a rough passion. Water from the tub began splashing about the patio, but neither showed any concern if they had even be able to notice through each other’s noise and movements.

            An exploratory hand had once again moved to massage the breast’s which fit so well into Ben’s roughly C cup equivalent sized palm, then Karly decided it was her turn to dominate the situation. She separated herself from him briefly and pushed him back to the side of the hot tub. Then she climbed atop and continued from where they had left off, rocking hard back and forth on his lap. Ben dug his hand deep into the back of Karly’s hair and pulled her face into his, the two sharing a series of long tongued kisses rolling as one into each other. Another familiar hand was holding tight to Karly’s butt, pushing and pulling to contribute to the sexual flow.

            Karly’s moans became more audible as the two continued to slowly build pace, shaking the Jacuzzi all about to the point that both of their drinks had fallen into the water with them, the light red color prominent at first but quickly swirled past their bodies to be filtered out.

            “I’m getting… close…” Karly said through significantly staggered breaths.

            Ben’s only reply was to be me more forceful while still remaining on the bottom, nibbling on her breasts and forcing her to rock faster on top of him. Karly released progressively louder noises, quickening with Ben each time, until she threw her head back, her delicate neck extending into the night, and shouted muffled pleasure to the stars.

            She collapsed her head and arms around Ben’s neck and struggled to catch her breath, as Ben’s own breaths echoed against her ears. His touch became soft again, tracing lines on her back while he placed a few kisses around her neck and shoulders.

            “That was amazing.” Karly whispered after some time.

            “I’ll say.” Ben replied. “Although, I’m not quite finished myself.” He said directing her attention back down beneath the water.

            Karly laughed. “Well, maybe she would dry off and take care of that.”

            She then stood from the water, exposing the whole of her upper body to the night and quickly grabbed one of the towels before the cold get through to her. Ben smiled as she did very little to dry herself off and instead quickly ran for the door, once inside she turned back toward Ben and gave him a quick flash of skin as she dried herself in a teasing manner.

            Ben was no longer hesitant and grabbed a towel himself. He haphazardly gathered up their clothing, wrapping them into a dripping ball, and tossed them inside. He then gathered up the alcohol which Karly was quick to relieve him of. As the two headed down the hall to the bedroom Ben stopped.

            “I’ll be right back.” He said. “I need to cover the hot tub.”

            “Alright,” Karly replied, “But be quick.”

            Ben stepped close to Karly and gave her a long kiss on the lips. “You should know,” He started, “I like to take my time. Makes it worth the wait.”

            “You tease.” She replied. “But if you’re quick I think it’ll be worth your while.” She said as she began to move her hand under his towel. They kissed again and Karly moved into the bedroom, leaving Ben staring in the towel. She turned back to him and smiled, then dropped her towel to the floor.

            “Hurry.” She said.

            And so he did, and nearly slipped on the wet wood floors. Quick into the yard, he stumbled to the tub and turned off its interior light. The cover came down with a loud wet thud, and he ran back inside, through the hall, into the bedroom, and into Karly.